This is my new pre and post test.

Today is Roald Dahl’s 100th birthday.

Roald Dahl is a amazing book writer he has written over 60 books  here are some that he has wrote

-Matilda teachs

-bfg

-James and the giant peach

-going solo

-magic finger

-the witches which is funny and full of adventure

and fantastic  mr fox  and many more but it doesn’t matter about how many books he has wrote its  just about the adventure and the exitment.

Roald Dahl is known to be our most favourite author that we know him as today. Everyone knows him for his books and the illustrations in the books.

“Coachers ready, players ready!” Our team was in the lead and I thought “what a start.” We were winning. The score was 10 to 5. Then all of a sudden “Cling, clank, rattle, rattle, boom.” The other team was winning by one point. Suddenly someone from my team shot two goals. We were now winning. The whistle blew for the end of the netball game. We had won! Both teams made a circle and cheered. “Three cheers for Bourchier St,. Horray, horray, horray! Three cheers for Grahamvale. Horray, horray, horray. One for the umpires and coaches. Hooray!” What a great game!

For inquiry me, Sharlotte and Mia.R are doing a movie and time line about world war 2

Thea Stilton is a simple but it is a good story to read. It’s about five mice who go all around the world and sometimes they will solve mysteries.

In one of their books Colette, Nicky, violet, Paulina and Pamela go to Paris and help Colette’s cousin solve a big problem.

By Elisabetta Dami

Diffrent cultures celerbrate diffrent traditions.

Australia is were we live.

Captin James Cook was a explorer.

Abel Tasman discovered Tasmaina.

I was laying in bed under my orange covers in my orange pyjamas when I herd thunder than I fell asleep in bed. Than I woke up there was silence and I felt something cold and wet it was water leaking from the basement. It had flooded the water was to big for me to walk throw so I swam out of my room and down the stairs and rushed to the front door than I opened it. The water push’s me out of the house and I fall to the ground with a THUMP! Than the door closed…  

In reading we read the lost thing by shan tan. Here s a retell.

I need to work on expanding my ideas and including adiectives. I need to work to use more paragraphs.My narrative has a clear orientation,complication and resolution.